Wednesday 29 April 2015

war witting

The ground shaking under my frozen feat. The trenches where shaking like mad. I saw blood dripping from the soldiers. I wondered if all the soldiers would survive war. All the soldiers bodied are shaking. All the soldiers don't want to go out there.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:29

    I like your descriptive writing. Mum

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  2. Anonymous30 May 2015 at 01:23

    What wonderful writing Daniel, I can picture it in my mind.
    What a very scary time it must have been for all the men who went to war.

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  3. Anonymous2 July 2015 at 01:17

    Daniel I think you added lots of describing words.
    From your brother

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