This is great Daniel. When you do the next one we need to see how to slow down the pages a bit so the reader has enough time. And lets try adding in voice.
This is a great story Daniel well done. I look forward to reading the next story.Mum
This is great Daniel. When you do the next one we need to see how to slow down the pages a bit so the reader has enough time. And lets try adding in voice.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story Daniel well done. I look forward to reading the next story.
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